Poem evaluation

My poem and sounds didn't go quite to plan as I couldn't retrieve or re-create the sounds I wanted to have orignally, but I made do with the resources I had and made something that could subsitute what I had planned. Miss Cooper liked it she said something slong the lines of it being 'beautiful' while others, not mentioning names, found it comical. I made it in adobe premier elements, I faded, over lapped, cut and removed sounds to cretae what I have posted. I think most of the sounds worked apart from the singing, so overall I'm happy with the result.